Thanks Nighthawk 2778!!
I agree that Clark needs to sit his kids down and talk to them about how he feels about them having sex before marriage. After all, Zared got married so early because his girlfriend (sorry, I can't remember her name at the moment
Yes, I'm going to do something with this. But I'm not telling what yet. Zared's girlfriend's name is Jenni.
I like how there are so many different things going on with all of the different characters in the story. How do you keep track of who is with whom and who is doing what?
I have a lot of notes and I have to re-read a lot. But it's easier when it's you own story. Olympe helps keep me in line, too.
And yes, Lois will pop in again.
