This is fun to read.
It was kind of a shock at first to see Clark with a woman other than Lois. However, I like how you've handled this aspect of your story.
I agree that Clark needs to sit his kids down and talk to them about how he feels about them having sex before marriage. After all, Zared got married so early because his girlfriend (sorry, I can't remember her name at the moment
). :rolleyes:
I like how there are so many different things going on with all of the different characters in the story. How do you keep track of who is with whom and who is doing what?
Are we going to see more of Lois popping in from the past? I love it that she's coming to the future to help things along.
Thanks for keeping me entertained in a novel way.
