Glad you guys have it all figured out. Saves me having to write a sequel where Lois whups Tempus' butt ... or, you know... not.

Thanks so much for the feedback, everyone. I'm kinda stunned, really, seeing as how I wrote this in about five minutes after the idea popped into my head last night. I really appreciate it.

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I reckon Woody's right though. Tempus would get too cocky to sneak up on her, or shoot her through a window or whatever, before she had a chance to know he was there. He'd have to announce his presence and gloat for three hours, first.
Reminds me of item #6 on the Evil Overlord list: "I will not gloat over my enemies' predicament before killing them."

And this...

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Two words: Time. Machine.
... reminds me of item #41: "Once my power is secure, I will destroy all of those pesky time travel devices."

Hmm... evil I think it would make for an awesomely funny (in a morbid kind of way) fic if Tempus got his hands on the Evil Overlord list and proceeded to implement it.

Fanfic | MVs

Clark: "Lois? She's bossy. She's stuck up, she's rude... I can't stand her."
Lana: "The best ones always start that way."

"And you already know. Yeah, you already know how this will end." - DeVotchKa