Good Valar! Short, and extremely intense. I can see it all like it's right before me, and the fact that you cut it right there...right before...IT happens, is all the more powerful. Very effective. Amazing writing. I think I'm going to go curl up and read some FLUFF piece now...
<sneaks off>
SmirkyRaven
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I love anything that ties my heart in a knot. Bring on the love and the pain.
