Hi Lara! Now that I'm almost finished with Supermen United, I fully intend to go back and read this story and give you fdk...
From what I've read so far, it's delightful!
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Okay, I'm back. I had been spottily reading all along but I finished up and I must say...
Wow! Neat idea. I have to admit that I'm not a comic book fan like Ann, so I don't know much about the villains and other super-heros that you've written about (just a teensy weensy little bit). And the Metallo thing was confusing to me because I'm used to the Metallo in Season 2 of Lois & Clark - Lucy's boyfriend Johnny.
But putting aside the things I'm "hazy" on. I am enjoying the story. Can't wait to see where you go with with Lara.
-- DJ