I loved this story!!!!!
Clark smiled. Their daily battle had begun.
I loved how you made this a daily "battle"
He glared at her. The breakfast issue was an old fight – basically, she wouldn’t eat if he didn’t cook, but if she didn’t eat, she got really cranky. Several months into their marriage he finally told her that if she wanted to eat in the mornings, she needed to arrange it herself. The end result was that Lois was fairly disagreeable most days around 11 am, because she would rather use her time in the mornings to sleep instead of cook. But if she could get him to do it…
It's like Perry said in an episode: "you know that boy would walk on water for you...or drown trying"
Great, Great job
