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I loved this story!!!!! Clark smiled. Their daily battle had begun.  I loved how you made this a daily "battle" He glared at her. The breakfast issue was an old fight – basically, she wouldn’t eat if he didn’t cook, but if she didn’t eat, she got really cranky. Several months into their marriage he finally told her that if she wanted to eat in the mornings, she needed to arrange it herself. The end result was that Lois was fairly disagreeable most days around 11 am, because she would rather use her time in the mornings to sleep instead of cook. But if she could get him to do it… It's like Perry said in an episode: "you know that boy would walk on water for you...or drown trying" Great, Great job 
Clark: "Can I have a rat chief? Can I, huh? Please?"
Perry: "Clark, do you want me to send you to the dark room?"
Clark: "The dark room?"
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Ah, cute and funny!
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Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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Very cute story. Thanks. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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 Love it! Definitely reminds me of stuff that goes on in my house. hehehe! Well done!
Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
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Very cute. Clark should know by now that he just can't win against her. Very well done.
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I have no time to quote, unfortunately, but that was completely adorable! And beautifully written, too. You didn't need that beta you didn't have.
Lovely! Please come back with more stories!
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I will and always be a big fan of Lois and Clark forever and forever.
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She's as bad as my kids! 
Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.
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oh cute story. Had me smiling all way long. Thank you.
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Awww!!! Very cute story!!  Sara
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Awww, cute little fic See ya, AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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Well they said it all but: Cute, adorable, and funny! I loved it. Thanks for making me smile. Natascha
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What fun!  Good story! ~Toc
TicAndToc :o)
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/me checks her thesaurus to find another way of saying cute. Oh, what the heck, it was cute. And sweet. And WAFFy. And just the nicest way to start the day. Thanks for sharing, MrsMosley. And don't forget to submit it to the Archive LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Wow! Wouldn't we all like to start the day like that. Mmmm...  That was adorable! Thanks for sharing! I'm still smiling.
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Lovely story, you had me smiling all the time.  As said before, it's SO L&C. I wouldn't mind waking up at 4am if it'd be like that every morning :rolleyes: Carolyn
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Beta? Bah. Please don't change a word! This has been a not-so-great day in the middle of a very busy, very stressful week, and I can't tell you what a bright spot your story was for me. It was everything the others have said - cute, funny, WAFFY, and so in-character - and it was also exactly what I needed to read when I needed to read it. So thank you! I do hope you have some more where this came from Best, Caroline
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Ah so adorable! Lois sounds like me in the morning. Grabbing the pillow and all the bedclothes, he yanked them off the bed and onto the floor. She wailed, "Nnnnnoooo!" Yup, that's happened to me. As for the food - not anymore. My hubbie irons my clothes for me since I don't wake up early enough. (I'm too lazy to do it at any other time either.) It was a darling way to spend time after work I'm glad I've had a WAFFy dose today!
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Thank you, everyone!
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So Lois doesn't like to get up in the morning... Cute, I can relate....
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