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I loved this story!!!!!

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Clark smiled. Their daily battle had begun.

I loved how you made this a daily "battle"

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He glared at her. The breakfast issue was an old fight – basically, she wouldn’t eat if he didn’t cook, but if she didn’t eat, she got really cranky. Several months into their marriage he finally told her that if she wanted to eat in the mornings, she needed to arrange it herself. The end result was that Lois was fairly disagreeable most days around 11 am, because she would rather use her time in the mornings to sleep instead of cook. But if she could get him to do it…

It's like Perry said in an episode: "you know that boy would walk on water for you...or drown trying"

Great, Great job

Ah, cute and funny!

Jackie

Very cute story. Thanks. Laura

Love it! Definitely reminds me of stuff that goes on in my house. hehehe!

Well done!

Very cute. Clark should know by now that he just can't win against her. Very well done.

I have no time to quote, unfortunately, but that was completely adorable! And beautifully written, too. You didn't need that beta you didn't have.

Lovely! Please come back with more stories!

Ann

that is so cute and sweet awwwwwwwwwwww.....

She's as bad as my kids!

oh cute story. Had me smiling all way long. Thank you.

Awww!!! Very cute story!!

Sara

Awww, cute little fic

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Well they said it all but: Cute, adorable, and funny! I loved it. Thanks for making me smile.

Natascha

What fun!

Good story!

~Toc

/me checks her thesaurus to find another way of saying cute.

Oh, what the heck, it was cute. And sweet. And WAFFy. And just the nicest way to start the day. Thanks for sharing, MrsMosley.

And don't forget to submit it to the Archive

LabRat

Wow! Wouldn't we all like to start the day like that. Mmmm...

That was adorable! Thanks for sharing! I'm still smiling.

Lovely story, you had me smiling all the time.

As said before, it's SO L&C.

I wouldn't mind waking up at 4am if it'd be like that every morning :rolleyes:

Carolyn

Beta? Bah. Please don't change a word!

This has been a not-so-great day in the middle of a very busy, very stressful week, and I can't tell you what a bright spot your story was for me. It was everything the others have said - cute, funny, WAFFY, and so in-character - and it was also exactly what I needed to read when I needed to read it. So thank you!

I do hope you have some more where this came from

Best,

Caroline

Ah so adorable! Lois sounds like me in the morning.

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Grabbing the pillow and all the bedclothes, he yanked them off the bed and onto the floor. She wailed, "Nnnnnoooo!"

Yup, that's happened to me.

As for the food - not anymore. My hubbie irons my clothes for me since I don't wake up early enough. (I'm too lazy to do it at any other time either.)

It was a darling way to spend time after work

I'm glad I've had a WAFFy dose today!

Thank you, everyone!

So Lois doesn't like to get up in the morning... Cute, I can relate....

Well... wow. This is such a fun story. *aptly avoiding using the word 'cute'*

I really enjoyed reading this. Light and fun and just plain sweet in parts. Loved the idea of them having to "fight" though the morning and the idea of Clark keeping count even though he knows Lois will always win the war. <g> This part had me laughing out loud:

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8:45 am

"Lois!"

8:50 am

"Lois!"

Very clever. *again, aptly avoiding 'cute'!*

I did notice one little slip - a 'He' that I think should be a 'His'. Under the 8:15 slot. (He glare faded as he looked down at her face.) Otherwise it was absolutely marvelous. Great story.

Dave

What a great story. Thanks for brightening my day!

Hope to see more like this in the future!!

I just stumbled upon this story, and I absolutely loved it! Thank you *so* much for posting. I'm glad I read it first thing in the morning, now I'm going to have a smile on my face all day long!

Is there more to this story or was it a vignette?

Just a vignette!

I've just finished reading, and I have to say I loved this vignette a lot!

I'm not gonna use the word 'cute' as I think its been a bit overused in this thread and needs to be left alone to cool down for a bit!

I will say, however, that this made me laugh and smile and I am really glad I took the time to read it!

So cute! I had to laugh, not only because it was funny, but because I am so much like your Lois in the morning. My husband even cooks for me too!

Delightful story! I saw a lot of Lois in me while reading this story. I never want to get up in the morning, and then I wonder why I am running late.

AnnieJ