Just noticed this one.
Havn't read any of it yet, but I like Buffy(even though I have only seen 5 episodes and most of my information comes from ficdom) and am looking forward to seeing your take on things.
I especially like the length of your posts. Very nice!
EDITOk, read part 1.Oh, I so much want to see a story where Lois suddenly realizes that she has been changed or potentialized! And the interaction with Faith would be interesting to read.
Love the story so far.
As to the other stories collecting dust, I'd be interested in seeing them. You are a good plot writer, even though you could use a little more descriptive filler to indicate the surroundings, though your description of the elevator was spot on!
Read part 2Nicely paced story. Wow!
Only found one error.
"It would have been nice to have someone like that on your side when you were fighting Glory, Lois." Lois pointed out, with some optimism in her voice.
I think that you meant to say
...you were fighting Glory, Buffy." Lois pointed out... Read part 3Can't seem to put this one down. Wow, Bill had a tough life. Why do I get the feeling that Bill is in Metropolis, right under everyone's noses?
James
