Your story is rather confusing. I am assuming that the person looking at the picture of Lois is Kal-El and he is still on Krypton? Who is the CK that has Lois on earth and is cruel to her? Obviously, in another universe. Is there no Lois on earth in his universe?
At first I thought it was H G Wells he was meeting, but at the end it sounded like Tempus.
Is this a universe Krypton was not destroyed and Kal-El never left and if so, who is the CK on earth that has Lois and why does he think Lois is a Kryptonian and if she is how could an earth man hurt her?
I actually like alternate universe stories and also those that have Krypton in them, are you going to expand on the story and explain, I hope?
