This is fun!
Not your fic, mind you. Because that was just boring. I fell asleep after the first paragraph and almost knocked my laptop off the table as my head hit the keypad.
You claim that English is your native language. Sure doesn't look like it.
When the waiter brings their food, Clark became a chicken.
People in my class made that mistake when we first started learning English. Perhaps you need some more lessons?
Or did you actually want to write a story about Clark being turned into a bird? Then you should explain how that happens. This is just plain confusing!
