Originally Posted by Mouserocks
Val, share the dang tissues.

Oh my goodness. This was so heartwarming and heartbreaking all in one swoop. Very well done, expertly written, and you weaved the song throughout so nicely. I probably have more to say about it but I'm like too emotional right now.

Oh, but I did like your explanation behind CJ and poor other Clark's tragic backstory.

clap Great job!

Thanks, Mouserocks. I did add a tissue alert to the story, so hopefully that will help others.

I'm glad you liked the backstory about CJ's arrival. Tragic, yes, but his new life will be happy and blessed. I wanted to have a unique explanation of why he was sent to Lois and Clark. Plus, I didn't want to have him only be a temporary part of Lois and Clark's family like was planned if there had been a 5th season.

I'm looking forward to any additional comments you may have.

Thanks for reading and commenting! hyper


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