Well, I've finally managed to catch up with this story. Nicely done.
Even though you went a bit overboard with the waffiness in the last instalment, overall in was an interesting, and different direction to take.
The inclusion of Morpheus (Dream) of the Endless was unexpected, but seemed to work out well.
Looking forward to more from your keyboard.
Tank (who won't mention that Dream's sibling Death most often appears in Gaiman's stories as a young punkish girl)
