Originally Posted by Artemis
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Wow, that's high praise! Thank you! Hope you like the final chapter as well. hail
Hi DC:
I'm sure I will. The hard part is past us. I was really wondering how Clark was going to get a Kryptonian heart. A minor curiosity - what was the deal with the strange pen with purple ink that Lois found and then was discarded on the floor. I stopped reading overnight on that chapter and in the night thought that the pen had some significance. That somehow it was linked to his heart condition and when she made tight circles with it that it caused his heart attack. But I was happier with the much better explanation you had.
I feel sorry for Zara. She and Kala - love the name - are going to have to live on Earth and she will need a job.
Seems like a sequel would be interesting too.
regards
Artemis smile1 hyper
P.S. I forgot to say I agree with all the wonderful things the other posters said too.

Thanks! The pen was just a neat little detail that I thought could be fun for Clark to take note of. He's just observing everything and anything around him, especially whatever is connected to Lois, because he's constantly sure it will be the last thing he ever gets to observe before he dies.

Battle On,
Deadly Chakram

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