This was great! It seems like their best bet is if the guy calls. You did a good job at making it all seem hopeless, if you intended to or not. Way too many files to look through and not enough information at this point. Love the emotions and insights of ALL the characters. You're doing a fabulous job! smile

Small nit-pick that I could be totally offbase for anyway. For this part:
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Right now, though, there wasn’t a cop in the city she’d prefer to have on her side.
Shouldn't it have something like "there wasn't another cop in the city..." It seems like it's saying she doesn't want any cops on her side. That would make it specific to Henderson. But then again, it's late. I could just be looking at it wrong.

Anyway, I cannot wait for the next part. I hope you don't keep us waiting too long. grumble

~Kristen

Joey: If he doesn't like you, then this is all just a moo point.
Rachel: A moo point?
Joey: Yeah, it's like a cow's opinion, you know, it just doesn't matter. It's "moo."
Rachel: Have I been living with him for too long, or did that all just make sense?