Nan,
I don't know what you are worrying about. My wife and I think you've finished this story beautifully.
I look forward to seeing the whole story on the Archive.
SNL.
PS. I can't wait to the fo9kkow uo to find out what Lori has.
PPS, Now you've finished this story, when are we getting the next part of "Mother's Day"? You're keeping us waiting too long.
With best regards,
SNL
A great fan of your stories.
