I just want to say that, regardless of my previous comments, I really do appreciate this type of thread as well. (I just wish I still didn't have so much to learn blush )

I've already gone back through my current story and am making changes based on some of the suggestions here. So thanks all, for your ideas.
(And keep them coming)

ML wave

She was in such a good mood she let all the pedestrians in the crosswalk get to safety before taking off again.
- CC Aiken, The Late Great Lois Lane