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Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK #291307 03/10/22 11:37 PM
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OP lovetvfan Columnist Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 686 Likes: 4 Canada	Yep, it's another TOGOM story... Spike: "There's a hole in the world...feels like we ought to have known." -Angel

Re: Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK lovetvfan #291309 03/11/22 12:46 AM
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KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer K Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,085 Likes: 40 Albuquerque, NM	Okay, well, I was going to quote some favorite lines, but then it was just pretty much ALLLLL of the “fight” leading up to the revelation. SOOOOOO good. And WHOA, what a revelation!! Kerth nominations are opening on March 3! 🏆2024 Kerth Award Posts 🏆. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, the show, life, and more! You can also find me on Tumblr and AO3. Avatar by Carrie Rene

Re: Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK lovetvfan #291312 03/11/22 11:37 AM
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bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,513 Likes: 29 Germany	Loved this. Strangely enough, I never bought that Clark was actually asleep in that scene in the car. I kind of reluctantly accepted that he was after reading so much fanfiction. But I don't think I've ever come across a fic that adresses this particular issue. I like how you have Lois deal with her fear and her grief and Clark with his guilty conscience. And the revelation was great - the anger directed at himself for deceiving her. The way he jumped from podestal Lois had placed him on. Truly a great story. Thank you for sharing It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK bakasi #291317 03/11/22 07:38 PM
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OP lovetvfan Columnist Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 686 Likes: 4 Canada	Originally Posted by bakasi Loved this. Strangely enough, I never bought that Clark was actually asleep in that scene in the car. I kind of reluctantly accepted that he was after reading so much fanfiction. But I don't think I've ever come across a fic that adresses this particular issue. I like how you have Lois deal with her fear and her grief and Clark with his guilty conscience. And the revelation was great - the anger directed at himself for deceiving her. The way he jumped from podestal Lois had placed him on. Truly a great story. Thank you for sharing Thank you so much! I never really believed he was asleep either (hence the fic lol). I appreciate you reading it. The song is good too! Spike: "There's a hole in the world...feels like we ought to have known." -Angel

Re: Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK lovetvfan #291363 03/19/22 03:19 PM
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Superjan Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 106 Likes: 2 Pa dutch country	This story totally spoke to my heart yesterday as I read it! Beautifully written with so much emotion!

Re: Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK Superjan #291364 03/19/22 03:41 PM
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OP lovetvfan Columnist Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 686 Likes: 4 Canada	Originally Posted by Superjan This story totally spoke to my heart yesterday as I read it! Beautifully written with so much emotion! Oh wow thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Spike: "There's a hole in the world...feels like we ought to have known." -Angel

Re: Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK lovetvfan #291365 03/19/22 06:49 PM
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Toomi8 Beat Reporter T Joined: Feb 2021 Posts: 425 Likes: 13 Alberta	Oh my goodness! I needed a lifejacket before falling into that amazing pool of angst. Wow. Great story, and love the different take. I've never considered that Clark faked being asleep. Gives it such a different feel!

Re: Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK lovetvfan #291369 03/20/22 09:13 AM
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Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 2,979 Likes: 11 Florida	Awwwww, this was beautiful! So angsty and sweet and just lovely! ^_^ ~•~

Re: Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK lovetvfan #291383 03/20/22 10:20 PM
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Blueowl Features Writer Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 996 Likes: 19 Central/Eastern USA	So wonderful ^_^ If this story was candy I'd prolly be in a sugar coma right now.

Re: Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK Toomi8 #291385 03/20/22 10:45 PM
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OP lovetvfan Columnist Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 686 Likes: 4 Canada	Originally Posted by Toomi8 Oh my goodness! I needed a lifejacket before falling into that amazing pool of angst. Wow. Great story, and love the different take. I've never considered that Clark faked being asleep. Gives it such a different feel! Oh wow thanks! It was always a theory I had so I am glad I got to use the song to try and make it happen. Spike: "There's a hole in the world...feels like we ought to have known." -Angel

Re: Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK Queen of the Capes #291386 03/20/22 10:48 PM
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OP lovetvfan Columnist Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 686 Likes: 4 Canada	Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes Awwwww, this was beautiful! So angsty and sweet and just lovely! ^_^ Thank you!! I do love some angst lol Spike: "There's a hole in the world...feels like we ought to have known." -Angel

Re: Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK Blueowl #291387 03/20/22 10:51 PM
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OP lovetvfan Columnist Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 686 Likes: 4 Canada	Originally Posted by Blueowl So wonderful ^_^ If this story was candy I'd prolly be in a sugar coma right now. Ha ha! I am glad I could help! Thanks! Spike: "There's a hole in the world...feels like we ought to have known." -Angel

Re: Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK lovetvfan #295926 04/23/23 06:48 PM
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Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	I should have read this sooner, but it's never too late! Love how you worked with the lyrics, such a great fit for L&C! Great job with both their POVs! I felt for them so much! Quote His shoulders slumped, and suddenly he wasn’t Superman. He was Clark Kent in a costume, and she wasn’t sure what to make of that. This here is an excellent line!! A wonderfully written, emotional story! Great job, thank you for sharing! What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK Anna B. the Greek #295931 04/23/23 10:04 PM
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OP lovetvfan Columnist Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 686 Likes: 4 Canada	Originally Posted by Anna B. the Greek I should have read this sooner, but it's never too late! Love how you worked with the lyrics, such a great fit for L&C! Great job with both their POVs! I felt for them so much! Quote His shoulders slumped, and suddenly he wasn’t Superman. He was Clark Kent in a costume, and she wasn’t sure what to make of that. This here is an excellent line!! A wonderfully written, emotional story! Great job, thank you for sharing! THANK YOU! I appreciate you taking the time to read it! Spike: "There's a hole in the world...feels like we ought to have known." -Angel

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