I should have read this sooner, but it's never too late!
Love how you worked with the lyrics, such a great fit for L&C!
Great job with both their POVs! I felt for them so much!
His shoulders slumped, and suddenly he wasn’t Superman. He was Clark Kent in a costume, and she wasn’t sure what to make of that.
This here is an excellent line!!
A wonderfully written, emotional story! Great job, thank you for sharing!
