Kerth Challenge #4 Lyric Challenge: "Open All Night" Complete FDK

Yep, it's another TOGOM story...

Okay, well, I was going to quote some favorite lines, but then it was just pretty much ALLLLL of the “fight” leading up to the revelation. SOOOOOO good. And WHOA, what a revelation!!

Loved this. Strangely enough, I never bought that Clark was actually asleep in that scene in the car. I kind of reluctantly accepted that he was after reading so much fanfiction.

But I don't think I've ever come across a fic that adresses this particular issue.

I like how you have Lois deal with her fear and her grief and Clark with his guilty conscience. And the revelation was great - the anger directed at himself for deceiving her. The way he jumped from podestal Lois had placed him on.

Truly a great story. Thank you for sharing

Originally Posted by bakasi

Loved this. Strangely enough, I never bought that Clark was actually asleep in that scene in the car. I kind of reluctantly accepted that he was after reading so much fanfiction.

But I don't think I've ever come across a fic that adresses this particular issue.

I like how you have Lois deal with her fear and her grief and Clark with his guilty conscience. And the revelation was great - the anger directed at himself for deceiving her. The way he jumped from podestal Lois had placed him on.

Truly a great story. Thank you for sharing

Thank you so much! I never really believed he was asleep either (hence the fic lol).

I appreciate you reading it. The song is good too!

This story totally spoke to my heart yesterday as I read it! Beautifully written with so much emotion!

Originally Posted by Superjan

This story totally spoke to my heart yesterday as I read it! Beautifully written with so much emotion!

Oh wow thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Oh my goodness! I needed a lifejacket before falling into that amazing pool of angst. Wow. Great story, and love the different take. I've never considered that Clark faked being asleep. Gives it such a different feel!

Awwwww, this was beautiful!

So angsty and sweet and just lovely! ^_^

So wonderful ^_^ If this story was candy I'd prolly be in a sugar coma right now.

Originally Posted by Toomi8

Oh my goodness! I needed a lifejacket before falling into that amazing pool of angst. Wow. Great story, and love the different take. I've never considered that Clark faked being asleep. Gives it such a different feel!

Oh wow thanks! It was always a theory I had so I am glad I got to use the song to try and make it happen.

Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes

Awwwww, this was beautiful!

So angsty and sweet and just lovely! ^_^

Thank you!! I do love some angst lol

Originally Posted by Blueowl

So wonderful ^_^ If this story was candy I'd prolly be in a sugar coma right now.

Ha ha! I am glad I could help! Thanks!

I should have read this sooner, but it's never too late!

Love how you worked with the lyrics, such a great fit for L&C!

Great job with both their POVs! I felt for them so much!

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His shoulders slumped, and suddenly he wasn’t Superman. He was Clark Kent in a costume, and she wasn’t sure what to make of that.

This here is an excellent line!!

A wonderfully written, emotional story! Great job, thank you for sharing!

Originally Posted by Anna B. the Greek

I should have read this sooner, but it's never too late!

Love how you worked with the lyrics, such a great fit for L&C!

Great job with both their POVs! I felt for them so much!

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His shoulders slumped, and suddenly he wasn’t Superman. He was Clark Kent in a costume, and she wasn’t sure what to make of that.

This here is an excellent line!!

A wonderfully written, emotional story! Great job, thank you for sharing!

THANK YOU! I appreciate you taking the time to read it!