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FDK: A New Dawn (3/18) #281097 06/22/18 12:31 AM
Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut Deadly Chakram OP Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut	Have a great weekend, everyone! Battle On, Deadly Chakram "Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent "One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon

Re: FDK: A New Dawn (3/18) Deadly Chakram #281124 06/25/18 08:14 AM
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folc4evernaday Pulitzer Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL	Okay giving this a bump since it obviously got buried over the weekend. Chapter 3 as challenging as it was to get it right really did turn out great. I love Jack's reaction and how you have Clark relating to him and in a place to help him just as Bruce had done for Clark so many years ago. Nicely done. ~ Folc4evernaday Jodi Picoult - You might not write well every day, but you can always edit a bad page. You can't edit a blank page. https://loisclarktribute.com Subscribe on YouTube

Re: FDK: A New Dawn (3/18) folc4evernaday #281137 06/27/18 12:39 AM
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OP Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut	Originally Posted by folc4evernaday Okay giving this a bump since it obviously got buried over the weekend. Chapter 3 as challenging as it was to get it right really did turn out great. I love Jack's reaction and how you have Clark relating to him and in a place to help him just as Bruce had done for Clark so many years ago. Nicely done. Thanks, Val! I never dreamed Jack would be so difficult to get right, but man, he gave me a run for my money! Even with me being fluent in sarcasm as a second language! It was pretty satisfying, however, to give Clark the chance to be the one helping. Brought it nicely full circle, even if he can't open his doors to Jack and Denny like Bruce did for him. Battle On, Deadly Chakram "Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent "One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon

Re: FDK: A New Dawn (3/18) Deadly Chakram #281157 06/29/18 03:56 AM
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Lady Loisette Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 332 Likes: 1	Jack! I'm happy he and his little brother got a better place to live. When Clark finally tells Lois about his secret she's probably going to remember him saying that he wasn't Superman. I was reminded of Justice League and Avengers: Infinity War in this chapter and now I kinda want to re-watch both of them. I could only watch Justice League though. I'm looking forward to the next part. "Who's asking? Clark... or Superman?"

Re: FDK: A New Dawn (3/18) Lady Loisette #281204 07/03/18 01:00 AM
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OP Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut	Originally Posted by Lady Loisette Jack! I'm happy he and his little brother got a better place to live. When Clark finally tells Lois about his secret she's probably going to remember him saying that he wasn't Superman. I was reminded of Justice League and Avengers: Infinity War in this chapter and now I kinda want to re-watch both of them. I could only watch Justice League though. I'm looking forward to the next part. Thanks for stopping in! Glad you're enjoying it! Battle On, Deadly Chakram "Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent "One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon

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