Lois & Clark Forums Forums Fan Fiction Lois & Clark Fanfic Comments: Swear to God, This Time It's Realistic

Elle

This is great.

You just have to continue!

More, more, more!

Tricia

Of course you'll have to continue!! You can't leave us hangin'.

Oh, and you should definitely go back and let Clark stroke Lois's cheek instead of his own!

You ask a group of fanfic addicts if you should write more fanfic.... what, are you trying to start a riot?!

Great start. I would like to see more rational justification and discussion from Lois on why she wants to ix-nay her mother from the wedding invite list. Seems to me like she's having an issue here, and I don't think Clark should let her go on it...

Betsy
(who tries really REALLY hard not to read WIP - but is glad she started this one!)

Elle,
ditto others
continue
soon please
merry