You ask a group of fanfic addicts if you should write more fanfic.... what, are you trying to start a riot?!
Great start. I would like to see more rational justification and discussion from Lois on why she wants to ix-nay her mother from the wedding invite list. Seems to me like she's having an issue here, and I don't think Clark should let her go on it...
Betsy
(who tries really REALLY hard not to read WIP - but is glad she started this one!)