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FDK:How I Spent My Christmas Vacation-Part 4 #18796 12/19/04 01:27 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Is a good thing that Lois knows everything. Quote "That's okay. I'd say it's useful in your job. One thing's for sure, Perry will be happy to see you when we get back, assuming we don't have to become colonists at Plymouth Rock." "There's that," she agreed. "I don't think I'd make a very good Puritan." "Neither would I," he said. "In any case, I'm not giving up on Herb. He can be exasperating at times, but he's surprisingly good at getting himself out of trouble. For one thing, people tend to underestimate him." Lets hope not! Quote "Wow," Lois said. She turned her head. "Wow, it's starting to get dark." "It's evening on the west coast of North America," Clark said. "The mainland is coming over the horizon now." :rolleyes: Finally getting there. More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK:How I Spent My Christmas Vacation-Part 4 #18797 12/19/04 07:32 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	You trying to finish this for the deadline? Or is growing? more soon!! Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK:How I Spent My Christmas Vacation-Part 4 #18798 12/19/04 09:32 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Nan An excellent part! Tricia

Re: FDK:How I Spent My Christmas Vacation-Part 4 #18799 12/19/04 10:51 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,384 Isle of Enchantment Vicki Top Banana
Vicki Top Banana Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,384 Isle of Enchantment	I was going to say just what Tricia said, but she beat me to it! Clark's re-telling of the story to date was so well-written! I'm not sure quite how to put this, but sometimes, if a character explains too much, it can seem obvious that this is really the author explaining for the sake of the reader. Does that make sense? Anyway, you had Clark tell Lois exactly what Clark really would tell Lois, and it reads very natural, honest, and true. Great story, Nan. Looking forward to reading more... - Vicki "Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster

Re: FDK:How I Spent My Christmas Vacation-Part 4 #18800 12/20/04 09:50 AM
Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico Karla Kent Columnist
Karla Kent Columnist Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico	Great part Next part soon please Karla My journal: http://charmingkarla.livejournal.com/

Re: FDK:How I Spent My Christmas Vacation-Part 4 #18801 12/20/04 12:29 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 1,356 Italy Simona Top Banana
Simona Top Banana Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 1,356 Italy	A new Nan' adventure story: the perfect gift (or present?) for Christmas! This is great Nan, I'm very curious to know when they are! Simona

Re: FDK:How I Spent My Christmas Vacation-Part 4 #18802 12/20/04 01:47 PM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut ChaaBreh Top Banana
ChaaBreh Top Banana Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut	I'm such a sucker for Alt-Clark finding his Alt-Lois stories... There's something so deeply sad about a wonderful guy like Clark/Superman pining for the woman that would totally complete him... What the heck year is it? Can't wait to find out.... Chris "Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"

Re: FDK:How I Spent My Christmas Vacation-Part 4 #18803 12/21/04 03:20 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 148 Hadera, Israel avia Hack from Nowheresville
avia Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 148 Hadera, Israel	Nan, This is such a nice story so far. I really enjoyed the retelling of what we know from Clark as well as all the little details you’ve added that make it impossible for Lois to misunderstand Clark and Lana’s relationship. The way Lois kept ‘interrupting’ with questions and Clark obliged and tried to clarify everything was really well written and in character for any Lois and Clark. I am now worried about the fact that Clark didn’t tell Lois about the Kryptonite. I guess they’re safe for the time being since Clark hasn’t arrived on earth yet but Lois will have to know at some point so she can protect Clark. I, too, look forward to finding out when they are. Looking forward to the next part, Avia "I get it, you're a ghost. You're dead. Big accomplishment, move on. You see a light anywhere? Go towards it okay?" Cordelia in 'Rm w/a Vu' - Angel episode 1x05

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