FDK:How I Spent My Christmas Vacation-Part 4 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Hi,

Great part.

Is a good thing that Lois knows everything.

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"That's okay. I'd say it's useful in your job. One thing's for sure, Perry will be happy to see you when we get back, assuming we don't have to become colonists at Plymouth Rock."

"There's that," she agreed. "I don't think I'd make a very good Puritan."

"Neither would I," he said. "In any case, I'm not giving up on Herb. He can be exasperating at times, but he's surprisingly good at getting himself out of trouble. For one thing, people tend to underestimate him."

Lets hope not!

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"Wow," Lois said. She turned her head. "Wow, it's starting to get dark."

"It's evening on the west coast of North America," Clark said. "The mainland is coming over the horizon now."

:rolleyes: Finally getting there.

More ASAP, please.

MAF

You trying to finish this for the deadline?

Or is growing?

more soon!!

Jose

Nan

An excellent part!

Tricia

I was going to say just what Tricia said, but she beat me to it!

Clark's re-telling of the story to date was so well-written!

I'm not sure quite how to put this, but sometimes, if a character explains too much, it can seem obvious that this is really the author explaining for the sake of the reader. Does that make sense? Anyway, you had Clark tell Lois exactly what Clark really would tell Lois, and it reads very natural, honest, and true.

Great story, Nan. Looking forward to reading more...

- Vicki

Great part

Next part soon please

Karla

A new Nan' adventure story: the perfect gift (or present?) for Christmas!
This is great Nan, I'm very curious to know when they are!

Simona

I'm such a sucker for Alt-Clark finding his Alt-Lois stories...

There's something so deeply sad about a wonderful guy like Clark/Superman pining for the woman that would totally complete him...

What the heck year is it? Can't wait to find out....

Nan,
This is such a nice story so far. I really enjoyed the retelling of what we know from Clark as well as all the little details you’ve added that make it impossible for Lois to misunderstand Clark and Lana’s relationship.

The way Lois kept ‘interrupting’ with questions and Clark obliged and tried to clarify everything was really well written and in character for any Lois and Clark.

I am now worried about the fact that Clark didn’t tell Lois about the Kryptonite. I guess they’re safe for the time being since Clark hasn’t arrived on earth yet but Lois will have to know at some point so she can protect Clark.

I, too, look forward to finding out when they are.

Looking forward to the next part,
Avia