Nan,
This is such a nice story so far. I really enjoyed the retelling of what we know from Clark as well as all the little details you’ve added that make it impossible for Lois to misunderstand Clark and Lana’s relationship.
The way Lois kept ‘interrupting’ with questions and Clark obliged and tried to clarify everything was really well written and in character for any Lois and Clark.
I am now worried about the fact that Clark didn’t tell Lois about the Kryptonite. I guess they’re safe for the time being since Clark hasn’t arrived on earth yet but Lois will have to know at some point so she can protect Clark.
I, too, look forward to finding out when they are.
Looking forward to the next part,
Avia
