OH MY GOD... There are so many thoughts in my mind. .. I hope I can list them all.
1. "Powerful" is the first word that comes to my mind when I was reading this story.
2. I realized that I read the hole chapter at loud voice! Have you considered to record you while reading it? It would be very interesting.
3. Oh, what would I give to actually watch this conversation between Clark (Dean) and Lois (Teri)!
4. Definitely I'm going to look for your stories in the archives!
5. I can feel Clark's feelings of anger, deception, sadness, desperation. .. and love...
Can't wait to read the next part!!
