Hi!
Great story!
I had guessed that Lois was pregnant before she admitted it
Wonderful idea, and beautifully written.
You pictured in a superb way Clark's feelings.
/me runs up to hug him, pushing Kathy away. He's mine!.
No, he 's mine! If Lois doesn't want him, I do for sure.
This cries out for a sequel! The Kents have to be told, Perry has to be told...
Exactly! Just imagine Lois and Clark getting in to the Planet, everybody looking at them suspiciously, and Lois saying: "Clark, we had forgot to mention we were going to be married, hadn't we?"
Good work.
CONGRATULATIONS!
And know that Xanabee and I are looking forward to reading more...
See you soon.
Anna_B.
