Elizabeth With all those door-knocking interruptions you certainly kept the suspense at full tilt throughout their conversation.
I toyed with the idea of having Jimmy come, too
Ken They usually work themselves out in my stories.
Sydney Glad you could catch up. It was probably better read in large slabs.
Vicki I haven't written too many revelation scenes. I'm so glad you liked this one.
Thanks,
Lynn. DC Thanks for giving your reactions to so many individual lines. Yep, it was casual, but we'd had enough angst earlier in the story.
Pat Of course, there will be wedding bells
but it's not in the scope of this story.
Kate Lois had done such a good job of investigating the murder, I couldn't let her fail to discover the biggest hidden fact! I'm glad you liked this version of Lois.
Morgana Yeah, it was a good place to finish the chapter. Poor Clark!
Laura There are so many revelation scenes in the FoLCdom - it's great you enjoyed this one, Laura.
Michael LOL - you know Lois so well, Michael!
Always a good idea to do what the Missus says.
Yep
Thanks to everyone for commenting.
Corrina.
