Thanks, Vicki, I'll take another look at 14... oh, right, got to prep that for tonight wallbash ... and see how it flows. Yes, originally this wasn't where the Part broke (yes, I was working towards a cliffy. angel-devil ), but when I re-wrote and re-wrote the Smallville arc, it worked better to break here.

Thanks for your input.

VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.