Lucky me, I've read the epilogue just after the Part Two. I hate when I have to wait =D
I definitely agree with the others. Write more, criticize less your work, and everybody will be happy. Your Clark is definitely more audacious than the Clark from the show, but you know what, it's pleasant not to see him wait and wait and wait again for once and do instead. And your Lois is very helpful.
I really like Wall of sound, and it's always a pleasure to read a story which takes places in it, moreover when it's as credible as yours.
I heard that you have one hundred pages for us, didn't I ?
