Yay, more feedback!
BJ:
I'm just glad to see that it wasn't my comments that ran you off.
As if! Honestly, if I was the sort of person who'd run off after reading a beta's comments, then I wouldn't use one!
Laura:
Loved the whole thing especially the raisin! LOL!
I'm so glad that the raisin thing works.
HappyGirl:
Looking forward to Part 2
Part 2 is sitting ready to go on my laptop. I will be posting it soon.
Evelyn:
In this next phrase, are you sure you want the word "prize"?
"...had to be to prize Perry away from the Planet..."
Yes, I am fairly certain prize is the right word there. Unless you're telling me that 'to prize something away from something' is a Britishism, in which case I may not and will edit that bit. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Thanks again for all the comments, guys, I'm so glad you're all enjoying this story. Part 2 is coming up.
- Alisha