Hi Alisha,
Thanks for the ficathon fic. Better late than never.
And I certainly understand how RL can interfere with fun stuff like fiction writing. I'm glad things are settling down for you, and I hope Aoife is home to stay.
“I’d say you’ve got more than enough character already.”
“Do I not normally look stunning?”
Aw, Lois, give the guy a break!
“Good. So I can tell you that I think you’ll make a better arm ornament than I would have, and you’ll take it as a complement.”
Gotcha, Lois! (A minor spelling correction, if I may: I think you meant 'compliment'.)
“The best I can come up with is a raisin.”
This line alone made the story well worth the wait. I'm sorry for providing prompts that proved to be so challenging, but you definitely rose to the challenge. I am *thoroughly* enjoying this story. Thank you!
He looked over at Lois, enjoying her meal as his raisin. No, he felt as if he had already won.
Awww.
Just how bad could this fire be?
Uh oh.
Any idea when you will post part two?
Joy,
Lynn