Hi Bob:
Good points and well said. I had to reread Erin's story before I felt I would understand the alternate ending. I gave my feedback in a PM, but it said the same thing you did. I haven't heard a reply.
Hopefully Ken will continue to write.
Hi Ken:
If you would like to do an alternate to an LnC episode (which is what we do a lot of here), feel free to use the scripts posted from the link above the first page of this board. That is often a great help to a beginning writer. Be advised that some scripts are not identical to what was shot in the show.
Good luck
Artemis
