I'm very intrigued by this story and the differences between it and the Pilot. Who would have thought that changing something as simple as one decision--to partner them together--could have so many different effects?
Lois sounds exactly like her with so many funny lines and thoughts that I laughed all the way up until the last couple paragraphs. The way she always has a plan--but a very vague one in terms of details--was perfect.
I really like the way we're seeing Clark through her eyes, though we have the advantage in that we know his secret. I absolutely love her thoughts as she hears him turning her down without insulting her and realizes that he just isn't afraid of her.
What's very interesting is how the interactions between Lois and Superman will play out. She's obviously fallen for the superhero as she did last time, but without (maybe?) the love at first sight from Clark, this could be quite different.
I'm definitely enjoying this and looking forward to seeing where it goes.
