This is quite an involved story and I'm sitting at the edge of my seat, wondering what's going to happen next. I agree with Tank, I don't know how you will resolve the whole "Lois is a murderer" thread, because I can't see Clark living happily ever after with someone like that, even if she was forced into it and even if she is 'his' Lois.

Also, her whole idea about the blur Superhero, I just can't see Perry going for that as a story. Not enough facts, too much conjecture (that wouldn't stop Lois from investigating though).

I love you alt-Clark, but then I'm an ol' softy for a good alt-Clark. thumbsup He's such a sweetie. laugh

Poor Lois thinking that the only thing she has to offer is her body. mecry

I have a few more minutes before my family notices I've snuck away to check the computer, so I think I'll read another part. laugh

VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.