Wow! I waited to start reading this story until all the parts were posted, and now I'm glad I did. It would have been torture to have to wait a week between parts!

What a fantastic beginning to the story, and what a unique way to make the revelation. I'm hooked.

Joy,
Lynn

p.s., I hadn't planned to comment on the story until I read the final part, but this beginning was too good not to leave FDK for it.