My muse has been injured too. It hasn't been working for quite some time. Perhaps I need to have a little talking with it myself, see what coems of it
Right away you have started your story with a spin I am curious to see how will span itself out. Will Clark show up as Superman to Lois? Tell her in more final words what he hinted at as he shut the door, about his dual identity? I'm not sure I could believe that Clark would not want to be Superman anymore simply because of Lois, but I can see him feeling like Metropolis is not the home town he was treating it if he is trying to distance himself from Lois.
I am intrigued!
