Nice start. I assumed the worst at first and was delighted to find the kidnapper's objective was not to simply rape her and then drop her on a random street corner.
Clark however has to assume that the use of a date rape drug is simply so someone can rape her and that Lois has already been raped.
I LOVED that you had Clark hear Lois calling for him but dismiss it.
And no listening for her heartbeat! Oh the pain you are going to put them through.
Frankly I don't know if I can watch, I'll have to see what next chapter brings.
