Really good conversation and explanation, very believable and waffy but one line kind of stuck with me
Her knees giving out, she fell to the floor, her heart broken. It felt as if a part of her had suddenly been ripped away, leaving a giant hole inside her.
and I started thinking, "I can't think about it today, I'll go crazy if I do. I'll think about it tomorrow...."
cuz Gone with the Wind rocks and you've made this story about as cool as that one.
