Everybody above has made excellent points. I especially agree about this being a Lois AND Clark story, even though they aren't together (yet!). I also love how you are filling in the gaps in characters, like Henderson helping Lois get an 'in' with Perry.
Looking forward to more!
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.
