Well, after reading all the other feedback all I can really say is that I completely agree with everyone! This part was SUPER!
You are such a talented writer and I am enjoying this story immensely... I almost don't want it to come to an end!
At the moment my family is going through a particularly difficult time due to my father suffering a sudden illness two weeks ago, an illness that will likely take him months to be rehabilitated. So I just wanted to say how much I look forward to your posts as reading this story allows me some most enjoyable time-out from RL. Thank you so much for that!
Cheers
Elizabeth
