I could pretty much quote every line in this part! That was amazing, Corrina. I'd been looking forward to getting home from work and reading this, and I was beyond my expectations.
I think TOC said it very nicely. Your portrait of Lois and Clark feels true. The way they act, how they react to each other, how they think, feel. It's really believable.It simply makes sense and it's pretty wonderful.
I'm sure you'll give us a few downs before the ride is over, but I just can't wait. Thanks for a lovely story.
