Wow, Marilyn!
I'm the first one to admit that I don't usually read song-fic, generally 'cause I'm not a pop music fan and so never know the songs that are used. But you got me hooked on the story, despite the song, in part one. And now I just *know* you have a sequel in mind. Right?
Please tell me you do...
/me begs...
Melisma (WAFFy here under her Rock)