Lovely story. I really enjoy it.
Yet, I must confess that I was surprised when Clark began to think about Lex. I think this story describes splendidly Clark's feelings in the first season: after Nigtfall and Lexor Hotel. Then Ramona's advice to become her best friend would really make sense. What if you leave out sentences concerning Lex and (in Lois's thoughts) Clark's declaration of love?
And you don't really leave it here?! You simply can't! Rather than calling, I would also like to see them face to face.
