<happy sigh>

Beautiful, Marilyn! thumbsup . Waffy, romantic, sweet and the perfect way to round off an afternoon.

I enjoyed the fact that Ramonah chose the record to play - much more fitting somehow than if Clark had. Also liked the little narrative tricks you used to tell the story - the cuts away from one location to another and linked by the dialogue. Very nicely done. And the final line was just the perfect way to end this one, I thought.

Thanks for sharing; this was a delight and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

LabRat smile


Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.

The Musketeers