I've Got This Friend Part Two - Comments - 10/14/03 07:54 AM
<happy sigh>
Beautiful, Marilyn! . Waffy, romantic, sweet and the perfect way to round off an afternoon.
I enjoyed the fact that Ramonah chose the record to play - much more fitting somehow than if Clark had. Also liked the little narrative tricks you used to tell the story - the cuts away from one location to another and linked by the dialogue. Very nicely done. And the final line was just the perfect way to end this one, I thought.
Thanks for sharing; this was a delight and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
LabRat
Beautiful, Marilyn! . Waffy, romantic, sweet and the perfect way to round off an afternoon.
I enjoyed the fact that Ramonah chose the record to play - much more fitting somehow than if Clark had. Also liked the little narrative tricks you used to tell the story - the cuts away from one location to another and linked by the dialogue. Very nicely done. And the final line was just the perfect way to end this one, I thought.
Thanks for sharing; this was a delight and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
LabRat