Oh I am so happy I checked the story again! I didn't realize you added so much. I was right about Ard<g> I am glad you went that route. Also the time Kal and Lois spent together was very sweet. I hope they have more conversations about Zara and how he plans to have children. She should voice her fears about Nor soon. And I hope he learned about the birds and the bees a bit. I can't wait for more. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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