This story is fabulous!!! I'm loving it, although since I came in on part 3, quickly looked for part 4, and would love to see part 5 soon (subtle), I have to go back and read 1 and 2 to see how it all began (even though of course I know how the episode went).
All the characters are so clearly written and realized, and everything is very vivid. I can see Lois glaring at the patronizing detectives who think they can actually intimidate Mad Dog Lane, smell the horrible mattress in her cell, see Clark pacing while Jonathan worries and Martha is the voice of reason - excellent!
More please.
Vicki
