Wow!! just caught on to this story.. and what a unique uptake... cool!!
I loved your portrayal of the twins... ok so the names are a give-away, but even without that it's so easy to know who is our Clark and who is the other twin... terrific!!
So, I might be wrong but presumably Jay doesn't have the urge to help as much as Cal, huh?
And... I looove this Lois